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Froststone:
Froststone stirred, snorting in his unconsciousness, as if he were running. Suddenly his eyes flew open and he jerked his head up, swear rolled down his brow and froth covered his neck, "Where- where am I?" He cried, his sides heaving up and down from panic.
(Okay peeps, I'm making a part 3 now! Plz don't comment on here the best you can!)
Fernbreeze:
She shook her head when Sparkfire contradicted her words, but she let it slide. When she heard him say he thought the water was safe, she lowered her muzzle an inch deep in the icy water and took in a long gulp.
The cold water slid through her throat like a stiff glacier and settled in her stomach. It wasn’t pleasant, but she didn’t complain.
(No Lakestar was caught again. I never agreed to let Lakestar go)
Bloodwing:
"I am taking the foals Lakestar and mine!" He snarled
(I am back! Lakestar got captured again and is in mountain her tearitory now) Bloodwing:
"We will take our fillies and leave!" He said waving his wings at Everhope and Cinderfrost. "You dont want to start this war!" He said menicingly
(Can we make part 3??? My phone and computer are glitching)
Sparkfire:
He stiffened and almost forgot to paddle his legs to keep himself afloat.
Once he was stable again he said, his voice sad and even. “If it hurts to talk about, you don’t have to talk about it. Everyone always says that talking about things makes it hurt less, but I think it’s the opposite. It makes it hurt more...” He trailed off, his chest tightening with unspoken words.
Everhope trotted into the Tundra herd because she was lost. She was found by a warrior Pegasus not to far from the edge of the territory.
Everhope:
" Can someone help me? I was rejected by my herd and now i have no home."
Everhope had deep cuts from being attacked by a mountain lion last week when she was crossing the Mountain herd to arrive here. She made it into the Tundra herd and passed out in the sand.
(Haha! So true so true.)
Goldencloud:
The mare didn’t bother to look back at Cinderfrost. The unruly yearling had made her come all the way out here to this trenched lands. Goldencloud was close to her mate but not so close as to make pegusi around them suspect she used him for protection. She could protect herself and everyone should know that. Of course Goldencloud loved Bloodwing...but she was not dependent on him.
Driftflame:
Driftflame had finally seen another pegasus in the sky. He guessed this was Billowfall. She hadn’t noticed how close she had flown from him and he decided to follow her. After all whatever the young mare had spotted must have been important. Billowflall had shot down from the sky quickly. The white buckskin stallion quickly noticed quite the scene. Mountain Herd- Bloodwing, a battalion and what seemed to be a new lead mare Driftflame had never seen before. He descended from the sky after Billowfall. He heared the young mare ask a question to the stallion Thunderhollow they had landed behind. “Not sure. I just got here too.” He answered, making his presents known by the three steeds near him.
Cinderfrost
Cinderfrost drooped her head in sadness, she trotted over to the Moutian herd steeds, she hated her life, she would resist staying with Tundra Herd, so that way she would save more lives this way. She would live on the edge if her border, as far away from Moutian Herd as possible. . She would train herself to fight. She hated Moutian herd with all her heart and soul.
Fernbreeze:
Fernbreeze stayed quiet for some time before she answered, “No, it’s fine. I need to talk about it. If I don’t, I’ll never learn to live with it,” she said softly. She took in a deep breath and then felt her throat begin to feel dry. “Do you think this water is safe to drink?” She asked. Fernbreeze internally kicked herself afterwards, though, because, obviously, if she was swimming in it, it was probably safe to ingest.
Thornhallow:
He watched the tension between Moonwillow and Goldencloud, and had stiffened. Thornhallow almost felt the need to protect Moonwillow to defend Tundra Herd, but he refrained from doing so and kept his feelings out of the way.
(sorry! gtg baiii)
Sparkfire:
He paddled closer to her and grew silent, like he was thinking deeply about something.
He floated in the water next her, staring down at the ripples in the clear water.
"Can I ask you how you lost your sight? If you don't want to answer, I understand."
( Bai! )
(Ok!..... WWWWINNNNNDDDFEATHER!!!!!)
(Who OWNS BLOODWING!?!?! The over-stallion needs to respond to Stormwing!)
Cinderfrost,
Cinderfrost looked up at the stallion, "I know," she wispered, "I dont want any herd to loose more lives than they already have"
Rainwillow: She gasped, suddenly realizing there was blood trickling down Froststone’s head. “Are you alright?”
Cinderfrost
Cinderfrost backed away from the two Overstallions, "I don't want to go back!" She winnied.
Thornhallow:
Thornhallow turned his head to look at Billowfall. He quickly looked away, though, still feeling some resentment to her attack on a poor colt. “Two foreign pegasi had shown up near the border, and thought themselves worthy enough to invade our lands. Three came from Mountain Herd, but one happened to be a previously stolen brother of Smokefire. Now, they are threatening to start war,” he said coldly, feeling indifferent not only about the pegasus he was talking to, but also on the topic.
Billowfall:
Billowfall rocketed through the clouds, hurtling herself toward land when she spied the over-stallion of Mountain Herd descend from the sky with a small yet vicious army. The young mare pinned her wings to fall faster, her forelock whipping in her face. The snow covered ground grew larger at every wing-length she hurtled herself. Billowfall quickly yet cautiously spread her wings and crested over the heads of her fellow herdmates.
She landed steadily behind Thornhallow, "What's going on? I missed it," she whispered, walking up to his side.
Fernbreeze:
She stumbled into a dive as he shouted the word ‘now,” and felt the winds biting against her ears. She winced in unburdened pain, not used to such turbulence battering her ears around like leaves.
Fernbreeze soon heard an echoing whoosh and she assumed that was sound bouncing off the surface of the water. In an attempt to stop herself before hitting the frigid, icy water, she pulled her nose out from the dive and landed rather smoothly into the lake.
Still, she shivered immediately as she felt her core temperature begin to drop with quick, ferocious speed. She looked over to where she heard ripples and assumed this was where Sparkfire was swimming and smiled. “That was exciting!” She gasped, her breaths coming out as hot steam.
Sparkfire:
He was able to hear her last words over the rushing winds. He looked towards his direction and waited for her to get little closer. They were directly over the lake, "Now!" He nickered and flattened his wings against his side.
He fell towards the water and immediately felt the frigid temperature enclose around him as he splashed into the lake.
Icequake:
Icequake rushed to his over-stallion's side, ready to protect Stormwing with his life. Rearing, he trumpeted loud and clear, for all to here him, "STOP!" He brayed, flapping his powerful wings, "THIS ISN'T DOING ANYONE ANY GOOD!" He landed, "Don't you see? All of the herds of Anok will begin fighting in confusion against their own kind if we don't begin to change."
Icequake pranced before his over-stallion, getting everyone's attention, "Bloodwing, what will happen if you DO conquer all the herds? I have the answer, they will overthrow or assassinate you; and there will be no one, or not enough pegasi to protect you," he took a breath, letting his words settle on everyone. He lifted up his head, "To be like Rockwing, is to be a cruel and hated over-stallion, one only seems to follow the wicked out of fear," Icequake leaned forward, just a wing-length away from Bloodwing, "Nightwing was the strongest and cruelest over-stallion any pegasus has ever remembered; he just was barely able to keep a hold of his herd, but every evil will be... overcome by good."
Fernbreeze:
She flicked her ears to his laughter, and felt her heart giggle in response. His resinous laughter had given away his position, but she didn’t care as she continued to smile brightly.
Then she realized she didn’t know when to dive.
“When do we start heading down towards the lake?” She shouted over the winds, hoping a captain like him would be able to hear her.
Sparkfire:
Laughter burst from his chest as the joy of flight drowned out his aching wings. He didn't care that he'd just given off his location to Fernbreeze. He glanced over his shoulder and was happy to see Fernbreeze keeping up with him fairly well.
He turned his attention back towards the lake- for it was rapidly approaching.
(same)
Fernbreeze:
She gasped as he shot forward, sending a resounding burst through her ears that sent her off, flapping her wings in rhythm. Her ears swiveled as she listened for crosswinds and anything that might get in her way. She didn’t know if she ahead of or behind Sparkfire, but she did know she was smiling as if she could see again.
Fernbreeze:
She snorted, unfurling her wings and jumping into the air. “Which direction’s the lake?” She asked, a mischievous feeling about her smile. Now, more than ever, she wished she could see his expression, his face.
Sparkfire:
He turned to face her and one corner of his lips turned up in a smirk, "Does it sound like a challenge? If it does, bring it on!" He said, a humorous and a competitive ring carried through his voice.
Sparkfire:
He shrugged in reply, but grinned handsomely. "Not really. I would've thought that you'd want to get back into the sky as fast as you could." He stated, wondering why she was cautious to fly again. She seemed like a brave pegasus.
( RB? )
Fernbreeze:
This time, she couldn't help but laugh hysterically. “You expect me to not be terrified of flying after recent events? I definitely want to walk,” she snorted. She followed the sound of his hoof steps, hoping she wasn’t too far away from him but yet not too close to him.
( Riverdawn? )
Sparkfire:
He glared after Smokefire as he pathetically flew after his lost brother. "Ignorant stallion." He grumbled under his breath as he folded his wings, wincing as he did so.
His back and wings still screamed in pain from when Storming had shoved him to the ground.
Why had Stormwing stopped him? Sparkfire could have stopped Goldenpine and then none of this would've happened! Instead, Bloodwing has a new lead-mare, Goldencloud escaped, and they tried to take a foal captive!
Sparkfire tried not to doubt his over-stallions decisions-and to take his mind off it- turned to face Fernbreeze.
He sighed gently and stepped towards her, "I need a break and for someone to rant to. Come with me to the lake?" He whispered his invitation so only she could hear.
(@Windfeather Lakestar is running for his life with Darkheart.)
Smokefire:
"Fine but stay out of my way!" he hissed and ignored her.
Windfesather:
"Brambletail I am following them!" She said as she hugged him and said. "I will come back! I love you!" Then she turned and flew away
Cinderfrost
Cinderfrost flew to the side but still kept up with Smokefire, "if I can't change your mind I'm coming with you," she
Cinderfrost,
Cinderfrost flew to the side of Smokefire but still kept up with him.
"If I can't change your mind, I'm coming with you," Cinderfrost said.
Lakestar:
He had been recaptured and he accepted it with calmness. He knew his overstallion would do what was best for the herd not for him. That was smart
Smokefire:
He did something he would regret. He rammed her and shouted. "GET AWAY FROM ME!! YOU MOUNTAIN HERD TRAITOR!" He kept flying after her brother
Cinderfrost,
Cinderfrost darted after Smokefire, she flapped her powerful wings and flew in front of him, "I know your scared for your little brother, but going after him, would only make it worse! I would go after him also! But I know that if I return I will be punished! So please stop! We will find a way to get him back." Cinderfrost winnied.
Sparkfire:
He watched in horror as the two Mountain herd steeds stretched the young colt.
He glanced to Smokefire, pity filled his gaze.But, when Bloodwing and his new mate left, Sparkfore relaxed and looked to Fernbreeze. “They left. You alright?” He asked, trying to hide the concern edging his voice.
(Eep)
Goldencloud:
”GET THAT COLT!” She ordered a quarter of the battalion to race after the unruly young stallion who had surprised one of the warriors. She used her new authority well.
Bloodwing:
"Sorry but I think they have chosen. Grab the colt and take him home to mountain her. We will deal with him later!" He said
Bloodwing:
"So you want him hurt?!" Bloodwing laughed cruely
"No!" Cinderfrost cried as shexsaw Lakestar get hurt,
"And I do not speak for Tundra Herd, but I know this from stories, the Moutain herd steeds left because of a cruel Overstallion, joing you will only make it the same from when the left the herds years ago!" Cinderfrost winnied as she stomped the hard ground with her hoof.
Windfeather:
"No!" She shouted.
Smokefire:
He sobbed and dropped to the ground. "Please dont hurt him!"
Goldencloud:
”Pegusi of Tundra Herd. Some of you decide from Mountain Herd! You come from traitors, and as you live here you only continue their contaminated blood. You can make yourselves right. By joining Mountain Herd you release yourselves of such causes. If you join us we will welcome you and treat you like our own. If you choose not to...” Goldencloud looked over her shoulder at the two stallions who held Lakestar. She nodded at them and they flew away from each other, spraining the colt and making him help in pain. “Your choice.” She hissed, with a smile on her face.
Cinderfrost,
Cinderfrost glanced from Bloodwing, to Goldenclould, to Smokefire, and to Lakestar, she did not know how she could help.