We can't find Dragon and we needed to make part 4 so I did it, sorry Dragon.
Here is the last comment from part 3-
Kifo:
Kifo used his powers to make a water bandage keeping the blood in the wound and keeping it wet. He looked up at the sky and said. "Ancestors help her!" He stayed by her side day or night. "Jeray, I will not let you die! I am here till the end!"
(Me too! it is so...fun, I guess is the word)
(Yup. It vilifies her way more than anything else. It shows just how selfish and evil she can be)
(Hi!)
Bakari:
He shielded his eyes from the bright light, but couldn’t help but keep them both open at the same time, witnessing Thea’s graceful decent, her lovely voice, and her extraordinary power. Then it was gone, and there she stood in all of her magnificence. He’d never shown so much outward emotion before, especially not when she whispered to the new colt.
Seaglade:
Seaglade saw stars behind his vision, but they weren’t stars. It was a filly, a beautiful one, who was healing his torn neck. It felt like he was a rock, a rock with algae all over it, suddenly being wiped clean to show beautiful metamorphic patterns underneath all the grime and gunk. It was like all the false stars had suddenly been cleared to show none but one; a beautiful, golden tan star.
Then it was over, and he was on his feet like nothing had ever happened. Then he looked around him, so confused. Nothing in the name of science could have explained what had just happened, and it scared him. All of them. They were frightening him.
Not just them.
But the feeling of love in his heart.
That feeling of hope.
Shimmerstream:
"Thea, Later today we are going to collect medicine ok?!" (When it is time for her powers)
Vida:
Vida looked up and saw that it was Thea's birthday. "I hope she gets here in time." She thought.
Thea:
She saw the mare that Silren and Iden were supposed to bring back to the Trap- Shimmerstream- was running towards the Trap. Thea glanced at Silren, very confused. "Um...okay....so that happened. I guess we can go home now. Come on Iden!" She whispered, not wanting to draw attention to herself and Silren.
When all 3 fillies were back together, they also darted towards the Trap. The sun was setting on the 3rd day.
Tomorrow, Thea would gain her powers. Her heart thrummed at the thought, but for right now, she just tried to focus on getting back to the Trap.
-skip until tomorrow morning, a few hours before Thea's bday(if that's okay)-
The three fillies and one mare flew all night, only stopping to eat and drink. They took turns drafting off each other, and before Thea knew it, the sun was rising over the dark horizon. They were still about 3 hours until they made it back to the Trap, but Thea looked at Silren and Iden and said, "Today is my first birthday...I want you both to know that if something goes wrong with me or my powers, you both are so brave and I am honored to spend my last few hours as a foal with you two." She called her voice shaking with emotion, even though she tried to hide it.
(Gtg. Be on tomorrow! Or maybe later tonight)
RedLeaf
”I am RedLea, you scum! I would tear your throat out if I could. Would you, by any chanc, know where I could find and kill my son? Raphael? You and the other foals don’t know how bad you are going to have it!”
(YAY!)
Jeray:
Jeray looked up at Kifo blindly, not knowing what to say.
Shimmerstream:
Shimmerstream darted toward the Trap.
Kifo:
"Shh Jeray I'm here help is comeing," He stroked her with his wings
(okay, good! X) )
Frayan:
Frayan, being so impatient, (as I often can be) turned and galloped away, following an animal trail, without waiting for the mare's response. Frayan thundered deeper into the dense forest, yet unsure of where to go. He knew a thing or two about herbs, and roots. Suddenly, out of nowhere, Frayan immediately tripped, hurdling himself headfirst into a pile of pine needles. He rolled onto his haunches, sitting upright, spitting out leaves and other stuff, still dazed of what happened and how he fell. A dark shape lay in the middle of the trail; Frayan squinted, getting up. He gasped, it was a pegasus. He crept cautiously to the body; now standing over it. And again, with another shock, he realized it was a mare, but not of his herd. The mare had crossed the territory.
"Who are you," The young stallion said gruffly, trying to sound tough, "and what are you doing here in Shadow Herd's territory?"
(Yup. She is mine.)
(Umm...he could capture RedLeaf. He doesnot have to worry about hurting her, cause she is super nice. I don’t know if you read the most recent flashback)
Frayan:
Frayan couldn't stand sitting there being helpless, he had to do something! The young stallion turned to the mare tending Jeray's wounds, "I can't just stand here," Frayan exclaimed, "I need to do something, go somewhere, get something; Jeray is my sister!"
(yeah, i'm not even sure where Frayan is! Lol)
(sorry, I was doing 2 things at once, texting and doing this.)
Raphael “They are in The trap. StormCloud and RedLeaf found us!”
Sharkstone:
Sharkstone tumbled head-over-hooves backwards. He sprung up and reared, fury ablaze in his yellow eyes, "Fine," He snapped, and then glared at Raphael, "You don't realize who you're messing with, foal." With that he lifted off, his painful leg tucked under him.
Shimmerstream:
"SHARKESTONE! Go back to the herd! Dont talk about this I will deal with them!" A older mare said, she was a brownish paint. "Raphael! Hello again."
(Are you hurt cuz Sharkstone called him a fool? if so, i'll change it, i'm sorry.)
Sharkstone:
"Shimmerstream? Ha, like you have rights here anymore!" Sharkstone whirled and kicked Raphael square in the chest with both hind hooves.
Raphael
Raphael rolls to his feet. “Let me see her! I am not a fool.”
Iden:
She bared her teeth.
"Thea, Silren. Change of plans. Go find shimmerstream. Stay safe and out of site." She couldn't emphasize that more. "I'll take care of this." She kicked off and shifted into the form of a messenger she saw land. (The messenger was part of the Herd. So they will recognise her.)
"Stormcloud!! Wait!!" She cried, "A scout has informed us that they are moving east towards the coast in hope that they can escape us. If we move, we can cut them off at Crabwing's bay." She explained, looking very confident. But deep down, her heart was beating 1000 mph.
(I know, Sharkstone is very, very, mean.)
(the comments can be edited. Everything else he said was fin. They can even know his name)
(ooooohh, okay, scratch what he said then)
(RedLeaf told everyone he died in an ice tiger attac) Raphael
“I am Raphael, and you will not stand in my way!“ he lunges at sharkstone
Sharkstone:
Sharkstone sputtered, "No you don't, your mother exiled you from Willow Herd, you have no place here." He snapped viciously, glaring heatedly at the colt, "I know you... you're that colt name Ra-" Sharkstone started, trying to remember the colt's name- "Ra-something, I don't remember."
Raphael
“Yes I do! I was born here! Where is shimmerstream?”
(HI RAINFIRE!)
Sharkstone:
Sharkstone hovered, gazing along the territory of Willow Herd; the two year old glared in the direction of Shadow Herd, where all the abnormal foals lived. Powers, he thought, everyone has to have powers. Suddenly, a glint of dark coat galloped below him; the pegasus had an unusual pattern, yellow stripes on a dark brown hide. Instantly, he knew; it was a Shadow Herd foal, entering his territory. Sharkstone dove after the colt; but keeping out of sight as well as he could. He darted above the colt and landed in front of him, prancing, head arched.
"What are you doing here?" He snarled; his ears pinned at the yellow striped colt, "You're one of the Shadow Foals with abnormal powers." (Sharkstone is talking to Raphael) "You," Sharkstone pointed at the astonished colt, "don't belong here."
Raphael
Raphael runs as fast as he can towards willow herd territory. Towards his birthplace, and all his memorie, but mostly, towards shimmerstream, so she can heal SeaGlade, so he can save shadow herd
Seaglade:
He heard muffled sounds and saw blurry faces as he tried to whisper, “I’m... so.... sorry....”
(Is she with shadow herd?)
Mistburr:
"Of course.... DO you mind getting Shimmerstream for me.... Thanks."
Raphael
Raphael thanks MistBur. I am glad Bumbleberry is out of here “I need to find an army and fight it!”
Seaglade:
He was shocked at Raphael’s sudden outburst. He stood there for a moment, his head churning. He wasn’t good with emotions and action, but with precise points he was. He then spread his wings wide, flew into the air, and then brought his wings in very quickly, all hooves pointed down at one target; Stormcloud’s head. All four made contact, but not being much of a fighter, didn’t do as much as would have been proper to kill a pegasus, but he was sure it would be enough for a major concussion.
Then, taking advantage, he pounced on her back bone with four hooves to send a tremor down her back. Then he turned to Redleaf. He zipped back into the air and landed a hard blow to both of Redleaf’s front legs, but was unable to avoid a terrible bite close to his main artery. He gasped and fell, dazed as blood started to trickle down the wound.
RedLeaf
”Yes.” She tries to stand, but fails
(Hello?)
Marlcloud:
“Shimmerstream doesn’t know you’ve come? You did the right thing to warn us, but you should have told Shimmerstream where you were going. Not that she doesn’t know you’re here, she knows everything.” Marlcloud concluded with a faraway look.
Seaglade:
He glared at Redleaf. “So what if I tell the entirety of Willow Herd? You won’t be able to touch me!” He back-talked under his breath.
RedLeaf
”Traitor, you will die with my foal!” She screams, “StormCloud, go on! I need to deal with this vile rebel!” RedLeaf sprints top speed to SeaGlade, quickly catching up to him.
”If you tell willow herd about this, I will break your legs and throw you to the ice tigers that you and the other fools thought took my baby! He is in shadow herd now, and I will rip his throat out!” She veers off and runs back to StormCloud.
Marlcloud:
She looked down at Vida, and then reared in surprise. “Let her go, Vida! I know this young filly by the name of Mistburr. Mistburr, what is it darling?” Marlcloud asked kindly.
Seaglade:
Then he dashed away, telling them no more. He had to get away, from everything.
Marlcloud:
She nodded to Vida and called for a meeting. She gave Jeray a break, and then turned to the rest of the foals. “An attack is imminent. Luckily, most of you have received your Gift from the Stars, but some of you haven’t. Regardless of the powers, we will not use them to kill. We will train like a normal pegasus, and we will fight like normal pegasi. Many of you will not see why we do this, but I fear if you kill with your Gift you will become hungry for more power,” Marlcloud spoke.
Seaglade:
“Most of the foals have their powers already. They are located in a large clearing on the northeastern side of the Tra-“ he cut himself off short. A strange, innocent though had just possessed him. Why was he doing this? What good was it too take part in the murder of all of these foals?
Stormcloud:
"YES! Where? Who has powers yet?"
Mistburr:
Mistburr heard and darted off to go find Shadow herd.
Seaglade:
He scowled along the way. Deep down, he was slightly grateful, but he mainly hated that the filly had followed him. It was his business where he was going, not hers! After this ordeal, he would definitely be informing Stormcloud and Redleaf of Shadow Herd’s position.
( Recomment:
Seaglade
He howled with laughter. “My hypothesis was right! Only bad thing is that you didn’t die,” he hissed under his breath. Then he glared at her with ears pinned and had no gratitude towards the filly. He turned away and continued to canter to Willow Herd. )
( XDDD I told you Seaglade was mean! XDDDDDD )
( Just me, then? Okay.... )
( Hello? Anybody home? )