(I am making part 4)

(Hello?)

Raphael

Raphael Looks at jeray and frayan, his new siblings. “are you alright!?” He asks jeray worridly (please dont kill her)

(Sorry I haven't wrote anything but here I go)

Silren:

She had been smiling and asking questions the whole way, and, finally, frowned. Silren wasn’t going to get to go into a foreign herd. She so desperately wanted to see how it was set up, and how hard it was to keep together. But, it would be safer this way, and she couldn’t argue her way through that protective point.

Marlcloud:

“That’s what the moss is for, Kifo. My wings are cleaner than the grass on this earthy floor. If I stop, the wound will get infected, and she could die from it, or from blood loss,” Marlcloud said between breaths, defending what she was doing and trying with all her might to keep the blood in. She turned her head to Jeray. “Jeray, I know it hurts very strongly, but I’m going to need you to be strong for me. Take in deep breaths, close your eyes, and squeeze something to distract you. Can you do that for me?” Marlcloud asked in her gentlest tone.

Kifo:

"Easy, Frayan, easy." He used his wings to gently hold him back. He saw the girls leave and he felt calmer, "Frayan, I saw panther tracks in the wood, that is what happened." He tried to be calming but he was worried about Jeray.

"Merlcloud, Don't touch the wound! Your wings are not clean and you could give her an infection." Kifo said in a strong quiet voice. Leadmare's did not like being told something but he had to make her know. "My mother, Dovefrost, told me."

Thea:

"As I'll ever be. So what's the actual plan here. We just hide in the bushes while you do the talking? They obviously can't see me though-they think I'm the Destroyer."

(we should probably wait for Nightmist, and besides I gtg see you later!)

(i gtg)

Jeray:

Jeray cried out, tears streaming down her face, "My back, it hurts!" The filly laid her head onto the ground. Her sides heaved, gasping for air.

Fayan:

Frayan whipped his head toward his sister, "Jeray! Calm down, you- The two year old choked on his tears- "You'll be fine; just lie and try to breathe normally." He said, laying down beside her head and holding her in his wings.

(Woah, never heard of that. Frayan doesn't really "create" lightning, he just shoots it out of his mouth like starfire.)

(Lilith creates lightning and can control storms(her main thing is lightning) but how about Frayan can use lightning to teleport to different places? That way he still can use lightning, he's just teleporting)

Jeray:

"What's h-happening?" Jeray squeaked, keeping her eyes open with effort, "Frayan?"

Her brother rushed to her side, "I'm here, Jeray," He said soothingly.

Anblick:

"I don't know. But, I assure you- a pegasus did not do this. It was probably a lone ice tiger." He said, still smiling at Frayan. He flinched as a bolt of lightning sprung out from Frayan. "U-uhm... could you....not shoot lightning bolts into the air?"

Thea:

"Okay, let's go. Fast and low-that way we won't draw as much attention to ourselves." She kicked off, but not before sending Bakari a guilty and apologetic glance. But, with Iden and Silren following her, she flapped her wings and led the way towards Sky herd.

Anblick:

He rushed to Frayan and pressed his wing against Frayan's. "Frayan! Calm down. Your sister will be okay. Thea, Iden, and Silren are going to find a healer, okay?" He said, his voice gentle. He smiled, trying not to show how scared of the lightning he was. "I'm your brother, remember? We're not going to let your sister die."

(Lilith, Dragon's OC, has really similar powers to Frayans- lightning and storm manipulation. Just letting you know that you made want to edit that)

(Don't mean to be pushy, but... anyone home?)

Jeray:

Jeray jerked, kicking out with her legs, recovering her consciousness. She gasped as she found a strange mare pressing on her wounds; wincing from the sting of the deep tears in her back. "Where am I? Who are-" Jeray cried out as the wound was pressed again between her wings. "Who are you?"

Thea:

She nodded once, then glanced to Marcloud. "I say we bring one more steed-just in case something goes wrong. In this case, one more steed wouldn't be a bad idea." She said, her voice even and determined.

Vida:

"Iden can you go with Thea and get there and bring her back ok?" She liked to take charge in moments of disaster

Iden:

She turned to Foxspark. And then to Marlcloud.

"I can go with you. I can be disguised as a normal pegasus. My original plan was only to go with one or two others. The reason I even brought it up was because my powers are perfect for this job" She said looking confidently with her miss-matched eyes, at the lead-mare.

(Idea:

Skip ahead 4 days-hear me out- Foxspark and Marlcloud(and maybe Shimmerstream) heal her to the best of their abilities, but Jeray is still in critical condition and close to death. Then, Thea gains her powers(she's a healer), returns to Shadow herd and heals her? Is that too much? Is it too selfish and focused on Thea? We don't have to do it, if it is)

Kifo:

Kifo set her on the ground and stayed beside her. He was tired and hungry but he would not leave her. When he heard Foxspark's words he realed back and said. "You Have To Heal Her!"

Marlcloud:

She turned her head to Kifo, who had shouted her name. She reared in surprise. How could one of them be hurt so badly?! A normal lead-mare would be banished or sentenced to treason for such an accident. Luckily, though, she wasn’t a normal lead-mare.

Marlcloud didn’t recognize the filly, but she instantly knew that the filly had received her gift from the Stars. “Foxspark! You and I both know what to do, now go do it!” She hissed, already putting lots of pressure upon the wound to stanch the blood flow.

(NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! I gtg! Bye! I is soo disapointed. :()

Kifo:

Kifo gently used his wings to go under her body and carry her, He walked back to camp. "Marlcloud!" He said as loud as he could without waking her up. Her body was badly torn and he needed his mother to help.

Jeray:

Hearing her name being said, Jeray looked up into a young stallions face. "I- I am. I need... help." The filly's face was etched in pain as she drifted into unconsciousness. (Yay, i spelled it right!)

Frayan:

Frayan's head jerked up from grazing, sure that he heard something. "Did anyone hear that?" The young stallion cried, not talking to anyone in particular. Another scream erupted from the direction in the Trap. What was any doing in there?

Jeray:

The yearling filly bucked, fortunately throwing off the panther. Jeray took that chance and bolted away; not caring where she went, only just to get away. Her back throbbed painfully as blood streamed down her shoulders, leaving a trail of red behind. The dark gray filly galloped as fast as she could; dodging trees as she tried to escape. But the obstacles were slowing her down as she went deeper into the forest. Jeray shrieked in fright as the panther gained on her with ease, leaping from branch to branch. Then immediately, just as the cat leaped off a branch to land on her back; her force bubble erupted out of instinct, surrounding her comfortably. The unfortunate panther hit the bubble hard. It rolled off the shield, too stunned to do anything. Jeray's shield popped, (or disappeared, or whatever. XD) as she stood as still as stone. Shocked, yet still having some sense in her, she edged away from the conscious, yet too stupid to do anything, panther. Jeray loped in pain from the cat; tears streaming down her face. It seemed minutes until the pain became too unbearable for the filly to go on. She stumbled, hitting the ground with a thud. Suddenly, Jeray lifted her head, and cried, "Help! Someone please HELP ME!"

Jeray:

Jeray walked deeper into the Trap, sticking to the deer trail. Her wings lolled along with her steps, her head swagging; like the horses when they walked. Jeray breathed in the deep piney smell of the dense forest, enjoying her stroll in the Trap. The yearling looked back, the opening long behind her. She didn't care much, as long as she stayed on the trail. Patches of light burst through the gaps of entangled branches; making the dew on the spiderwebs sparkle like the stones of a beach. Jeray stopped, closing her eyes; just for a moment, she thought as her mind drifted away.

A sudden loud snap pierced her ears, awaking her with a jerk. The sound had com from behind her. Jeray's heart thudded uncontrollably; she didn't dare turn around. The filly felt a sudden itching to fly, to get away from whatever was behind her. Jeray waited, waiting for something to happen. But nothing came. Finally, she gave in; Jeray turned her head slowly. Two yellow eyes glowed from the darkness. Suddenly, a huge black cat lounged out and landed on Jeray's back; the filly's scream echoed throughout the forest.

Vida:

"Yes, we should. Lets send Foxspark, Thea and some of the others, like Dovefrost to Willow herd, Kifo, Frayan and Iden can go to Sky herd and Me, Jerry, And Silren can go to Ash herd. Deal? Marlcloud? Bakari and Anblick and Bumbleberry and Merlcloud can stay here?"

Bakari:

“Why would I lie to you when I have no lies left worth telling?” He muttered to Bumbleberry. It couldn’t even be considered a snap, because it was so lifeless and dull even the trees cringed. He liked the trees. They were reliable, and they had amazing stories to tell, and he’d always listen.

“What do you need, Bumbleberry? I have to find someone, and I don’t have a lot of time,” he snorted, perking his ears at the powerful bray he assumed had come from Marlcloud.

Iden:

"We better get back." she said ignoring Vida's comment. "Plus, I uh. I have an announcement to make."

She took a deep breath and called for Shadow Herd to meet in the clearing. The call went for a mile or two so she hoped everyone heard her.

(Is there a villain?)

(she is in willow herd territory?! That is awesome, cause RedLeaf is Willow Herd!)

RedLeaf (Raphaels mother, Willow Herd)

11 months ago

”The...the...the ice tigers!” RedLeaf fake sobs, “They took my baby!” These fools will beleave me! After all, what kind of mother chases her baby into the wildernes? Me! “They just...appeared out of no-where!” Inside, she grins Now that they feel sympathetic, they will give me whatever I want. Almost whatever she corrects Then, with enough hard work, I will be the lead mare! Jadecloud won’t know what hit her, and adakitewing will give me power!

(They have flower tears too?)

Iden:

She watched as Vida ran, then Thea, then Bakari. She felt more abandoned now then she ever had. She realized both Vida, and Thea, liked Bakari. And them seeing her and Bakari together, must have left them heartbroken. But they had it all wrong. Bakari didn't care for her. Especially not after he ran off like that. He was just being a good friend. looking out for another friend. She decided that Bakari had too many fillies going for him. He had to talk to the others if she ever wanted Bakari to feel better. She flew slowly. She shifted to Thea just in case Vida were to run away from her. She found Vida. Landed and din't make eye contact. She shifted back to herself and held back tears.

"Look Vida. I know you like Bakari and you saw us together. But he doesn't care about me. He was just checking in on me because I," she stopped herself before she told the truth" I hurt my ankle. He was just being a good friend. It's time one of us lets him go before he is overwhelmed. And I might as well be the one."

A few tears escaped her mismatched eyes and matalic white flowers sprouted. She quickly stomped them out and looked away. She couldn't bare to make eye-contact with her sad friend.

Raphael

Raphael smiles at his new brothers. This is definitely where I belong. With my new brothers he thinks. He smiles broader.

( ;( Poor Thea and Vida and Iden..... NOT TO MENTION POOR BAKARI! XD Just kidding lol )

Bakari:

He felt a pang of remorse when Thea, too, flew away. Why was everyone leaving? Why did they all loathe him to such an extent? It appeared he could only trust and count on his cousin. Even with this conclusion, he couldn’t shake the feeling of being utterly alone. He had no other friends, didn’t feel inclined to make any other colt friends, and he didn’t have a family to protect him.

The thing he didn’t realize, was that the foals of Shadow Herd were his family. And he was leaving them as he muttered an apology for intruding on Iden’s space and galloped away, his pathetic wings dragging out behind him. No more fillies, no more anything, he thought to himself, his mind made up.

He didn’t know that it would come so soon.

Vida:

Vida grabbed Thea's wing in her teeth and landed her, "Thea. I get it. I hate my father." She spat the word, "We are sisters. nothing else matters. Dont stress. Lets go back to the other foals." She walked slowly so Thea could keep up, she saw Iden with Bakari and she stumbled back saying, "I need to go eat sorry Thea!' And she darted as far away from them as she could. She was scared Bakari had seen her and she kept running. Her tears left a trail behind her and she could not stamp them out

Silren:

She took in a deep breath, internally tormented with emotions, but she put on a smile as Raphael asked Anblick this question. She found it cute, how all of them were promising each other to be brothers. She, on the other hand, already had a cousin, and didn’t need anymore siblings.

Bakari:

His eyes narrowed at Iden’s lie. He inspected her leg and snorted. “You appear to be fine. Now, tell me what is really going on, Iden. I won’t stop asking until you tell me, even if I have to wait until I am old and gray,” his voice was hard like marble, but his face still held that same cool calm. His eyes, on the other hand, sparkled green with emotion.

Iden:

She jumped at Bakari's presence, EXTREMELY embarrassed. She quickly wiped her eyes and thought of the first excuse that came to mind.

"Oh uh, nothing. I just... hurt my ankle." she said.

She noticed the fierce way he talked when he asked if anyone had hurt her. But she didn't ask. She focused on trying to make her excuse partially believable.

(gtg!)

Frayan:

Frayan startled as a colt landed next to Bumbleberry, "I- I'm Frayan. I, I have one sister, uh, I have the power of lightning." The young stallion suddenly saw himself, asking questions as those.

Frayan:

Frayan let go of Bumbleberry, suddenly realizing that he hadn't eaten all day, "Yeah, I'm hungry, too!" He exclaimed as his stomach rumbled.

Kifo:

Kifo landed next to his brother. Raphael and The new colt named Frayan. "Hello. I am Kifo. That is my little brother, Bumbleberry. My sister Vida is out flying and my mother is on a trip to Sky herd. Who are you." Looking at Frayan. "And what do you like doing, If you know what is your power? Do you have a family or not?"

Frayan:

Frayan winced in astonishment, "How could anyone think you're weird? I don't; I think you're compassionate."

Raphael

Raphael smiles. “Well...um...I a, hungry, if anyone else Is too” (frayan) “No, of course not, bumbleberry!” (He doesn’t think bumbleberry is weird. He was responding to frayan)

Bumbleberry:

Bumbleberry hugged him back, "You dont think I am weird?" He asked concered.

Raphael

Raphael wing hugs Bumbleberry and smiles and Frayan.