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(I'm going to make part 16)

Silverflame:

When Breezebell returned to the team, Silverflame was still a little miffed at the way she was acting. He got not wanting to do things without his twin, but he thought Breezebell was acting a little ridiculous, after all it wasn't like she and Redmoon weren't going to be able to do be together anymore. This was only a skills evaluation, to see how you reacted and adapt to things you weren't used to. Redmoon was only being removed to prevent her from hurting herself worse, Breezebell was just turning a relatively simple thing into something overly complex.

Silverflame shook his head, Breezebell attitude was the least of his worries at the moment, he needed to be focusing on this race. "Okay," he said, "So if Breezebell's going second, who should go first?"

Breezebell glared at Mistcloud and didn't move from beside her sister. Redmoon nudged her and Breezebell shook her head. Redmoon nudged her harder and Breezebell looked at her for a long time. She let out her breath and crawled back over to her team and glared at her sister for a long time. Redmoon's heart broke at pushing her sister away and she looked at the ground to the side.

Silverflame:

"Come on, Breezebell. Please?" he pleaded

Horizongold, with a supreme effort, managed to keep his temper in check. He tried to smile at Breezebell but didn’t know if it looked like a smile. “Mistcloud is right,” he said. “And if you want, Breezebell, put your yourself second in the group order. Then when your turn is done, you can come back to be with Redmoon. IS that fair?”

Mistcloud:

Mistcloud glanced at Whiteshadow, who shook her head. "I'm sorry Breezebell," said Mistcloud, "Redmoon will have to sit out this last round, but she will still have a chance to join the Army early."

Breezebell perked her ears. "So Redmoon can come back on the team?!" She said, excitement rising. Redmoon glanced at Mistcloud and then glance at Breezebell.

Mistcloud:

Mistcloud landed in the clearing, just in time to hear Breezebell's outburst, "Breezebell." said council mare after the filly had finished, "Redmoon isn't eliminated from this contest. The reason we were pulled the yearlings out of the course was not to disqualify them, but to make sure none of you hurt yourselves to badly. I admire your loyalty to your sister, Breezebell, but you need to participate in this evaluation."

Breezebell glared at him. "It's eaither we are both on the team, or none of us two are," She said. "I won't leave my sister out. In fact, I think she join the army with her feircness and the fact that she made it through most of the obstacles after she got hurt. She has been fighting hard and she has kept going. That is what should be worthy of a someone in the army. Determination<" She shouted. Redmoon glanced a thank you at Breezebell.

Silverflame:

It took him a few minuets to realize that Breezebell was wanting to not participate. "But, Breezebell." said Silverflame, "We need you."

Redmoon took her leg away before the mare could do anything and avoided her eyes. "Leave me alone. I'm FINE," She said defiantly. She wouldn't admit to weakness because she was still in pain. Not from the cut, but from her fathers death. She believed she had to stay strong to make him proud of her. She didn't want him to die in vein. Breezebell glanced at her sister and raised her wing to Horziongold. "If my sister is not going to be on the team, than I'm not eaither," She said, her ears pinned and she walked over to Redmoon and stood beside her. Redmoon glanced at her angrily. "What are you doing?!" She grunted. "Being loyal to my family. I won't do anything without you," She said.

( back )

Whiteshadow:

Whiteshadow was helping Cloudroot treat the yearlings that had managed to hurt themselves. When Redmoon begrudgingly walked over, the gray mare started to look over her leg wound, blood was still oozing out of the cut. "Nothing appears to be broken." commented Whiteshadow, "But it's a pretty deep cut."

The gray mare proceeded to make sure the cut was cleaned out, and smear a herb past on it. "Almost done." said Whiteshadow, then she put a layer of moss over the paste, and finished by wrapping Redmoon's leg with a vine to keep everything together. "All done." she announced.

Silverflame:

The yearling colt glanced around the clearing, and saw that no one else had raised their wings.

Horizongold listened to the question. He hadn’t thought of this. “Good question,” He said, nodding to Silverflame. “Yes, the groups with eleven members will have the first runner also be the twelfth. Any other questions?”

Silverflame:

Silverflame raised his wing, "I have a question," he said, "Some of the teams have less members, will some other member of the teams have to go multiple times."

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(Hi guys. It’s me, River. I created a new account for my phone. FYI, I will be out of town form today to Sat. But. I have this account, so I will comment when I can