From around the mountain they were on came Brightsky, calling out to them. “Hey guys, what are you doing?” She landed and folded her wings, then her eyes widened. “Wow, are you learning to fly?”
Spark pranced. “I don’t think I can do this!”
Brightsky rolled her eyes. “If you don’t go I’ll push you off. And Starpebble and I will be here to catch you!” Ember shot her a look. “And Ember, I guess.”
“I guess?!” neighed Ember. “I’ll let you know I--”
“Only learned to fly five minutes ago?” teased Brightsky.
Ember subsided. “Yeah, I guess, sure.”
Spark backed up. “Oh no, I don't think I can do this….”
Starpebble smiled, but the story of Comet flashed through her head and she had to struggle to keep her smile in place. “Sure you can! Trust me.” Oh drat, I don’t sound very convincing!
Starpebble turned to Spark. “Go!”
Spark took a deep breath and galloped toward the edge.
Brightsky watched. “Sunfire said he’d be along soon; he needed to talk with Cobrawing. Apparently Mountain Herd has been sending out more raids as more and more of their steeds die.”
Starpebble shuddered. “The poor foals…” she whispered. A vision of Snowstone flashed in front of her eyes and she turned away, feeling suddenly very cold in the desert heat. She tucked her wings closer and watched Spark gallop of the edge, spreading his wings.
And then he fell.
Starpebble gasped and took flight in an instant, Brightsky not two seconds behind her. They swooped up and over the edge of the cliff, diving down the vertical side like peregrine falcons, quickly gaining on the plummeting Spark, who was trying to spread his wings.
They each reached him at the same time, and while Starpebble snatched at his right wing, Brightsky shot down past him and flung her wings wide.
Spark crashed into her back and they both fell, but slower, and Brightsky regained her wings and gripped Spark’s left wing in her teeth while Starpebble bit down on his right. They began to flap their wings and slowly rose in the air until their wingbeats coordinated and they rose to the top of the cliff and set Spark gently down. He fell to the ground and slowly got up, legs shaking. He backed away from the edge.
“I am not doing that again!” he neighed.
Starpebble landed, slightly winded. “Yes, you are. ‘If you never spread your wings you won’t fly’,” she quoted. It was something Star the Healer had said, long ago.
Spark shook his head. “No!”
Starpebble stepped toward him. “Yes, you can. This time Brightsky and I will go with you.”
Spark looked at her, pleading in his eyes.
“Do this, Spark,” Starpebble whispered. “For me.”
He raised his head. “Let’s go.”
He turned again to the edge and began to race toward it, Brightsky and Starpebble galloping next to him. Their hoofbeats merged until they sounded like one pegasus.
Then they raced over the edge.
I just caught up with reading this, and I must say, this is AMAZING!!! I love the little call backs to the series, and I can't wait to read more!! Keep up the good work, Icy!
I LOVE THISSSSSSSSSS -rallies all of Canyon Herd to rally behind Spark to cheer him on- "Spark! Spark! Spark! Spark!"
Haha! I was right! Spark fell! I love the story so far!
Chapter 1: https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/fate-chapter-1
Chapter 2: https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/fate-chapter-2
Chapter 3: https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/fate-chapter-3
Chapter 4: https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/fate-chapter-4
Chapter 5: https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/fate-chapter-5
Chapter 6: https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/fate-chapter-6
Chapter 7: https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/fate-chapter-7
Chapter 8: https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/fate-chapter-8
Chapter 9: https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/fate-chapter-9
Chapter 10: https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/fate-chapter-10
Characters:
Fogfire~ (Snow Herd, captain) gray stallion with navy feathers, black mane and tail
Snowstone~ (Snow Herd, yearling) white colt with mint feathers, white mane and tail
Starpebble~ (Snow Herd, weanling) silver filly with pale blue feathers, white mane and tail, deep blue eyes
Rainshine~ (Snow Herd, weanling) dark silver dapple filly with silver feathers, black mane and tail
Moonfrost~ (Snow Herd, mated mare) dark silver mare with dark purple feathers, black mane and tail
Echoflower~ (Snow Herd, single/widowed mare, elder) white mare with pink feathers, white mane and tail
Sunfire~ (Desert Herd, captain) gold dun stallion with violet feathers, gold mane and tail, thin white blaze
Brightsky~ (Desert Herd, mated mare) bright palomino mare with mixed blue and purple feathers, white mane and tail
Cobrawing~ (Desert Herd, over-stallion) bay pinto stallion with green feathers, mixed brown-and-white mane and tail
Dustcloud~ (Desert Herd, lead mare) palomino mare with pale green feathers, white mane and tail, wide white blaze
Ember~ (Desert Herd, black foal) solid black colt with black feathers, black mane and tail
Spark~ (Desert Herd, black foal) solid black colt with black feathers, black mane and tail, four white socks
Mild criticism welcome, and inform me of any mistakes!