The four pegasi sat in silence, the tension building up. One by one they began to look at Fernpuddle for answers. There were so many questions boiling inside of Stormwhisper that she needed to ask. Hopefully, Fernpuddle would be able to answer them all. “So, are you going to explain Fernpuddle?” The filly said loudly, breaking the long lasting quietness.
Fernpuddle flinched, he didn’t exactly enjoy his sister raising her voice. But, she did have a voice. He was the only one who could explain anything. So, the colt cleared his throat and began to speak in a cracked up voice. “So, it all started when Mossbrook told us the legend of the white and the black foal. You remember that, right Stormsight?” His eyes questioning her hoping there was no need to re-tell it.
The filly nodded her head, just wanting him to get on with it already. “Well, last night when you were sleeping, I heard Smokewing talking about the Desertherd attack.” Larkfall flinched, it was one of his most gruesome battles to partake in. Fernpuddle continued dryly, “Well, he said that the reason the battle started was because Copperwing planned to execute the black foal.”
Trail had a blank look on his face. The news had been broken long ago that the colt wasn’t meant to live to a yearling, by Copperwing, the overstalion himself. “Well, I knew the black foal was around our age… And I couldn’t let that happen…”
Stormwhisper knew that she was about to get herself into a long story. So she folded her wings and comfortably tucked her legs under her chest. By the looks of it, Trail and Larkfall began to do the same. They most likely had heard the story before, so she could tell that something big was about to be told.
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Thank you for reading! I know I'm new to this MB but I already know this is going to be really fun to write and see your reactions! Please correct me of any spelling/grammatical/plot wise mistakes, it really helps.
Jungleherd
Overstallion:
Smokewing-Grey tipped brown feathers, grey main, dark brown pelt, male
Lead Mare:
Mintcloud-Turquoise wings, green main, light brown pelt, female
Weanlings:
Stormwhisper- Purple feathers, auburn mane, silver pelt, female
Fernpuddle- Purple feathers, silver mane, auburn pelt, male
Elders:
Mossbrook-Aqua feathers, mane as green as the leaves of a tree, a tan pelt, female
Willowmoon- Orange feathers, black mane, white pelt, female
Medicine Mare/Stallion:
Whiteroot-Dark green feathers, dark brown main, white pelt, female
Dessertherd
Overstallion:
Copperwing-Red feathers, dark brown mane, reddish brownish pelt
Captians:
Larkfall- Bright yellow feathers, white mane, cream pelt, male
Black Foal:
Trail-Black feathers, black mane and tail, black pelt, grey socks
Next Chapter:
Chapter 6: https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/cloud-dancers-chapter-6
Table of Contents
Chapter 1: https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/cloud-dancers-chapter-1
Chapter 2: https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/cloud-dancers-chapter-2
Chapter 3: https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/cloud-dancers-chapter-3
Chapter 4: https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/cloud-dancers-chapter-4
Chapter 5: https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/cloud-dancers-chapter-5
Chapter 6: https://www.theguardianherd.com/messageboard/fan-ficton/cloud-dancers-chapter-6
Nice!
OOOOOH! Hehe!
Cool!!!! Cant wait to hear the rest of the story!
Sorry that this chapter was a bit shorter, Chapter six is going to be pretty long so I kinda needed a segway into it XD