This is the poem I wrote for Flamefrost's poem challenge:
Lightfeather's Death
By Annika Z.
In the dark of the night
A white mare woke in a fright
The pain in her belly
Would not let her sleep tight
She called out for help
And a young pinto came running
"Hold still" said the pinto, whinnying
"Don't try to stand up"
Through the dark of the night
The pain only increased
Till by the light of the dawn
The pain finally ceased
A cry of shock cam from all around
It made the white mare turn quickly round
To her surprise a black colt was what she found
Lying asleep on a pile of moss
How could something so small come at great loss?
But as the sun rose
The white mare sighed
Then she quietly died
Moans of sadness filled the air
"Lightfeather, Lightfeather"
They all cried, but it was to late
A meadow of gold is now what she calls home
This is AMAZING!! You may have forgotten the part were Lightfeather bit Star's ear to wake him up but it's still truly AMAZING!!!
Beautiful. I actually got chills when I read this. Fly straight and find your rest, Lightfeather.
Yes, thank you, that would be awesome!
I’d love to share this poem in the next newsletter!! May I?
Thanks
AMAZING!!! So sad.... but amazing!!!
I said this in the comments on the other post, but this is incredible